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Post by zachmiller on Jul 5, 2014 9:48:28 GMT -5
Dragon
She’ll wrap her tail around you and make you cry her tears. They’ll fill your room with that low orange glow, and slowly burn down through your pillows and mattress, and cool, back into obsidian, around the coils of your box-spring.
In the weak light of morning, your room will be filled with the weightlessness of blackened feathers, ashy eyelash-kisses all over your ceiling and walls,
and the fire-alarm in the kitchen will still be howling, but you won’t have noticed until now.
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Post by Cir on Jul 6, 2014 21:44:46 GMT -5
It seems we share a similar affliction for love (or love lost?) poetry this week. This is very good. It starts in a fantasy world with a "low orange glow". Then the illusion seems to wear off in the second stanza. By the third we are at terror. You're one of the few people that can accomplish real surprise through writing. Have you considered horror?
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