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Post by frodissa on Jul 24, 2014 6:35:09 GMT -5
As with the sneakily-increasing weight of the pages that come before the final chapter of a book, her past was heavy in her left hand.
Finally, she let it go.
The last few pages lingered, turning richly, slowly; drenched in sunlight and joy.
She savored them, as she was known to do. As she had with a book, or two. Or several hundred, as the story went.
Lord, have mercy.
And the chair she sat in the night before she died still sits by the firepit in the backyard.
It is slightly askew and a bit distanced from the others.
I can't bring myself to move it.
Not just yet.
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Post by zachmiller on Jul 25, 2014 20:39:46 GMT -5
Wow, this is beautiful. I can't bring myself to critics anything about it.
I love the bit of rhyme in the 4th stanza.
And the line "Lord, have mercy." -- It seems that this line should feel like a cliche (because it IS a cliche, I think), but it doesn't, and familiarity of this phrase make the whole thing feel so close and accessible.
I like how you make using a book as an metaphor for life actually work, and bring fresh life to it.
Very nice.
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