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Post by zachmiller on Jul 10, 2014 18:25:09 GMT -5
The Reddest Kiss
My heartbeat draws her like a fool on summer evenings, once it’s cool; she nuzzles up against my neck and counts eight beats until she’s full.
When she is done she’ll leave a speck, a dot, the color of regret, the consequence of one wet kiss she’ll give me so I can’t forget.
I’ll wonder later, what is this? was I so stricken I could miss, while watching night consume the day, her deep inside of me, in bliss?
If I had know I’d bid her stay, give her my palm, to keep, but nay; she buzzed goodbye and flew away, she buzzed goodbye and flew away.
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Post by Cir on Jul 12, 2014 23:20:58 GMT -5
Very cool Zach. An ode to our greatest predator. I wrote about one in the first stanza of my week two submission. I had fun reading this.
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Post by frodissa on Jul 18, 2014 5:58:00 GMT -5
Clever Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
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