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Post by tarasummerville on Jun 21, 2014 9:48:09 GMT -5
Recycled blue birds punctuate branches and decrescendo into dusk Unencumbered six'o'clock sky hangs over collections of shiny things stored in wooden boxes with asphalt and cinder lids. Street side dissonance- Cadillacs and squirrels Maytags and spiraling maple seeds Pothole puddles and pigeons only create harmonies at six'o'clock.
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Post by frodissa on Jun 21, 2014 10:58:49 GMT -5
Somehow I feel like I have read this before. I love the imagery!
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Post by Cir on Jun 22, 2014 17:30:38 GMT -5
Very good stuff Tara. I love the repeated musical terms, the concept of the morning being a creative, cooperative, very hopeful moment. I like how at a glance and for the first couple lines, I wasn't sure if it would read well. Then by the time I got the to the end it had all fit together well and sounded great which went beautifully with those final lines. Nice work
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