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Post by jcalfee on Jun 14, 2014 9:32:09 GMT -5
Tastes like a peanut butter cookie to me.
It was round, brown, flat, and perfect, with cross-hatched indentations on top-- pressed in by a loving hand with a fork.
The slight dusting of sugar caught the light, sending out tiny subliminal invitations-- promising glorious peanut butter distraction.
Everyone at table 21 grabbed one, not waiting for the DJ to give the okay.
After one bite, her eyebrows gathered in anger, the tasteless treat dropping to the pristine cloth as she turned to her date for reassurance.
Tastes like a peanut butter cookie to me.
It was then she knew that they would never marry.
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Post by Cir on Jun 15, 2014 21:44:19 GMT -5
It can be terrible when someone's worldview turns out to be incompatible with yours. This reminded me of some wedding and dessert shows my wife and daughter (and really, me too) watch. Not sure it's for me, however your technical ability shines through as always.
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Post by frodissa on Jun 16, 2014 21:54:55 GMT -5
Love that ending!
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Post by tarasummerville on Jun 17, 2014 17:54:00 GMT -5
Classic Jami. Love this. It's very, very you. When we get together... and you come... i request right now that you read this. I would love to hear you read this.
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