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Post by zachmiller on Jun 4, 2014 18:41:09 GMT -5
we as screaming white
dandelion fireworks
vanish into blue
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Post by Cir on Jun 7, 2014 17:38:35 GMT -5
This haiku has so much energy. Almost more than the haiku can contain. What are these "dandelion fireworks"? I'm really interested in this poems origin.
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Post by tedeschi026 on Jun 7, 2014 17:41:30 GMT -5
When I read it the first time I was confused. Then the second time I broke it into two sentences. The first ending after dandelion and then the rest as the second. Is that how you intended and if now can you explain.
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Post by tarasummerville on Jun 7, 2014 18:42:17 GMT -5
I'm assuming that dandelion fireworks are those white floaty things that look like snow. And i think it captures summer in such a great way. Also, it must be said- if this was posted anonymously... i would have known this was you, Zach!
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Post by aspetz on Jun 8, 2014 9:22:16 GMT -5
Perfect image of summer.
Dandelion fireworks.
Very clear
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Post by Cir on Jun 8, 2014 16:43:09 GMT -5
Ah "dandelion fireworks". Very cool.
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