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Post by dedwinhedon on Feb 19, 2013 17:44:39 GMT -5
This thread is for all the pieces you might write that aren't your primary piece being voted on each week. No pressure, extracurricular stuff.
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Post by dedwinhedon on Feb 19, 2013 17:45:53 GMT -5
Week 1 Alternate Disconnect Do emoticons count as syllables in this weeks contest prompt  |
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Post by dedwinhedon on Feb 19, 2013 17:46:12 GMT -5
Week 3 Alternate
Black
Black
it's just darkness
to most
to the chosen few
it's a universe of infinite potential
a sea of hate
anguish
emptiness
isolation
waiting to rape
dismember
murder
cannibalize
or a plain of mystery
intrigue
excitement
adventure
waiting to be uncovered
explained
discovered
completed
personally,
I've been pleasantly surprised
in a pitch black room
more times than I've been
raped
murdered
and cannibalized.
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Post by tedeschi026 on Apr 2, 2013 5:16:28 GMT -5
Love this.. Love the two stanzas " a sea of hate and waiting to rape"
This is a poem that emotes emotion. What good writing should do. I think you need to make sure you never stop writing. I was sad you didnt write the last few weeks and pray it wasnt due to critique. Everyone reads a poem and sees different things. Some will love and others wont. Good job
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